After roasting 1,000+ landing pages, here's the element order that replaces a sales team

martyamark · x · 2026-10-04

Based on 1,000+ landing page roasts, @zalkazemi lays out a landing page formula: order the elements so the page can replace a sales team. Identity (logo + name) comes first — names must be easy to say, spell and remember; logos simple and striking, with non-.com TLDs included (fly.io, jam.dev). The poster got his own page roasted and shares his reworked hero copy focused on the problem solved, not how the product works.

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